saraulima 13/02/2023
I consider myself a very critical person, mainly with my readings, and I try my best to give a position without influencing much. But this book is becoming a difficult mission. I will try to unravel it here.
Looking at the topic covered here, there was potential, but the writer did not know how to work with them. There was no development of the themes in an important or understandable way. It was lost in history. With no strength.
The narrative was weak, the writing was poor, poorly formulated.
The story itself was very bad, the main character's behavior was not appropriate, I understand the question of her strong personality, but the relationship between them did not apply. It was kind of forcibly built. As if it had to exist in some way. As if we had to swallow it. I confess that I often feel embarrassed and sick. Kind of incredulous about what I was reading.
There are twists and turns and an attempt to improve the outcome is acceptable.
It's ok about that. I understand that it was necessary, but it was not enough to succumb to the path taken.
And of course we would have a happy ending, it was beautiful, it was exciting, the support she gave him was very punctuated and I really liked it. But it didn't make up for everything else.
It could have been better.