Vitoria527 25/10/2022
Bléh
The concept is exceptional, I saw it on booktok and went running to read it, but I was immensely disappointed.
The characters are poorly characterized, the neverland setting that had the potential to be magical is poorly described, shallow characters and with motivations thrown in the wrong way, I feel that this book was made only to write about sex (and poorly written), the protagonist is extremely vulgar, not giving us the opportunity to empathize, I love empowered women, who respect their own bodies and feel sexy, and she is anything but that. Sex is great to take advantage of, but written in an engaging way that really adds to the plot, anyway I won't linger on this topic.
The boys have no history, just a mystery thrown in here and there to give the impression of depth, they are just decorations for the fetishist protagonist to have sex, without exception.
The author's writing I see a lot of potential, and if you combine that with her creativity for plots, I'm sure future good books will come.
She needs to delve deeper into the plot, make a mind map maybe help, really develop the characters and much more...
There are many negative points and I hope the author reads it with kindness, because I believe that this story has the potential to be much better, reread the work as many times as necessary and think about how to improve them.